Nice solo!
It definitely shows how much work u putted on this, just one thing, if you are working on FL Studio, try putting a Soft Clipper on the master channel, that will help the lil clipping parts of the song.
Keep up the good work QCT!
Btw check vote and review on my newest song "Out Of Fantasy" and if you liked VeloCity, you will love Turbo!
Hails...
Actually This was done like, last night :)
Thanks I'll see what your sounds sound like.
Pretty good!
Pretty good for an unmastered song, ill give some tips that might help you in your mastering of this track haha:
Well first, the piano...srsly dude dont, never again use the fl pianos k, those pianos really suck! I'll recommend you to either find a good piano sample or download a good VST with virtual piano on it like, Orchestral, Hypersonic or Nexus, but well if you dont have any money for that, you can still fix that piano, just try adding some FX like reverb or delay, that should work well.
Well second, at 00:36, turn up the volume of those drums, I know what your trying to do there, but trust me it will sound much better with those drums vol UP!
Then at 1:01 you dropped the bass! And the cool part comes, the only bad thing there is that your filtered lead is way to low, try turning the vol of that thing up! And finally your kick, just make it a lil bit harder cause in dance music, without a hard kick, your try just...doesnt work, so make that kick punchier haha!
Great remix, of a great song!
Keep it cool bro!
l0l d00d thanks im trying to install nexus today, :D s0 im going to take that FL Keys out (lol i did reverb them and delayed them WTF?) will d0 everything u said! thanks!
Trance and Electro...powerfull combination!
Very nice song, I downloaded the song and I did noticed the differences, but still theres some issues with this song, first thing I noticed at the beginning of the song is that the kick gets drowned in some parts because of the bass, so you can notice the volume differences (between kick without bass and kick with bass on it).
Later on the song I noticed some clipping in the bass where it filters in and out, Im not sure if thats caused because of the bass sound, so im not giving you negative points because of that.
Another thing I did notice, (I dont know if that was intended, but it didnt seemed so...idk) was that the kicks on the build up also get drowned by the bass and again, causes volume differences...
Aside from all that, I enjoyed this song a lot, very neat and original product here my friend!
Keep it cool Karco...
Hails!
I know the mixing issues are there, read the second paragraph of my commentary. ;)
Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Bravo!
Great submition pal! You know, there is a contest about tears and sorrow going on right now on the Audio Forum, you should enter with this song, just go to the Audio Forum and look for the thread called "Mac8 Sorrowed Tears" or something...and if you win you can earn some $$$
Haha, come on, give it a shot!
Lol, y'know to this day I've yet to have visited the Newground Forums, it seems I should. XD I'll probably work harder on somethin' for a contest though. Like I said, this took all of half-an-hour to do and I really don't feel this is contest level. Thanks for tellin' me though! I'll check it out and hope I can find some time to work hard on somethin' tear wrenching! XD Thanks Johnny!!! ^_^
~Dylan ^_^
Edit: Well I took your suggestion and put it out there anyway. What have I got to lose right? XD Thanks Johnny! ^_^
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Oh man this song is like Falcon Sexxx!
Hey man!
Wow! Never got the chance to listen to your music and I can see you're very good at classical! Very enjoyable tune and very cinematic also, great for an intense battle scene, but I just like to give you some pointers (just my personal opinion):
First of all congratulations cause the instrumentation is unbelievable! Really stunning, sounds like a real orchestra playing...I suppose you dont use Edirol Orchestral right? Haha
Well now, some tips, first the song is to short for a huge long battle like the one you described and it lacks in structure, everything was flowing nicely until 00:48 where you completely stopped the music, I can see what you were trying to do, but dont stop the whole thing, leave a nice soft string in the background to give that feeling of dramatic battle in slow motion (if that was what you were trying to achieve), after that I was expecting some kind of buildup to another chorus but you just ended the song...well its pretty good for a preview, I really hope you can get this finished.
Btw awesome choir at 00:33 Im really digging it!
I'll submit some of my classic songs soon, hope you can check them out and drop me some reviews. Btw when is the next MAC going to start?
Keep it up man!
Hails!
Some excellent suggestions Johnny! And you know what, i'm in total agreement with you. You see this song, in it's current state is really a demo reel. It was formed to see if it would fit the bill for a current project i'm on. It did not, and so the song was dropped. I however didn't want it to be forgotten so I cleaned it up a bit and put it up here in hopes people would enjoy it.
Ideally this song should be about 4 minutes in length.
At 0:48 where the music fully stops, the imagery was a sadder one that required it of me. In this particular situation an arrow finds itself flying straight into a soldier's chest.
It's not important on which side, a soldier whom woke up every morning with a dream and ideal. Who sword to lay his life down on what he believed.
As the arrow hits everything goes silent. Everything. Shouts, anger, suffering, bleeds away with his wound. The build up is his struggle to keep pushing. He slices an enemy down, receives a stab to the side. He weeps, but not for his loss. He weeps for his failure to ensure change. He weeps because though his gave it his best his life was simply not enough.
I look forward to your submissions, please pm me when you get a few up there!
(Also I used to use nothing BUT Edirol Orchestral, nowadays, I use other things ;D! The first song I have on this page "The Tank's Thunder", uses a lot of Edirol in it)
Thank you greatly for your honest and insightful review, i'm glad you liked it!
Great song!
Very professional sounding piece! But not that good...dont take this as a malicious critic, Im just trying to help you see where you can still improve ^^
Okay here we go:
Very nice intro! Your crash sample is great! Very nice equalized and great effects! Also great samples at the beginning, Im assuming you made them yourself right?
Your kick, its equed with to much bass and that makes it sound a lil bit crappy try making it more dry and heavy.
Your bassline is the same allover the song, try making another pattern to give it more variation.
2:00 The song is getting very repetitive at this point, same bass, same drums, synths and melodies...2:36 finally we reach the buildup...nice gate, same from fruity loops I guess...nice calm piano btw! The buildup begins, but the kick overwhelms everything to much...again, less bass or low the volume a lil bit.
The choirs and the piano solo are amazing btw, great job with that, it gives the song some variation, great job with that! Im assuming you recorded yourself playing, very professional ; ) The only thing is that it was a lil bit raw (alone if it makes sense) and very long, I would have some smooth drums playing or perhaps backup strings or even pads along with the piano to add even MORE variation...okay you entered the buildup but we come to the same thing, it makes the song very boring (sorry for that) but again at 7:48 the same gate with the same pattern and melody, some things added, but still the same thing...
Very beautiful song overall! Im digging the piano solo, ahh.....lovely! But in my personal opinion the gates ruin this great feeling, and the song its way to repetitive, I know you will say its repetitive cause its the full length song and blablabla but seriously: same gate melody, same drums, same bass...come on! But...Im assuming you really worked off your ass in this one, so Im still giving you a nice 10
Seriously, this is probably the most professional sounding song Ive ever heard on NG, I just have been here for 2 weeks so I havent heard much, but I can safely say, this is the very best in terms of neatness and professional sound.
Hails...
Yes very true to above said comment.
Nice!
Very nice sample my friend! Percussion is very well variated and its a perfect loop! Yeah, I think I might use it some time!
Thanks for the share!
Greets.
gracias
HOLYSHIT!
Just look at the date you submitted this XD lol just found it in this week 1st spot haha well congratulations man! Thats a hell of a record!
The only think I disliked was that you used the same melody used in the 2nd with some variations, but still you got the same elements that you had in the last one, synths, piano part, drums are very much the same, exact same bass, you added a new chorus...well thats good, but anyway its a cool tune!
Great sequel pal!
Greets!
Well... it was the same song sort of just updated so it had to have the same melody! Otherwise it wouldnt be called Heaven rd. 3!
Anyways, thanks for the review!
I love this tune soooo much!
Great cover bro! Its seems that you played this on a different key from the original, but still is really good! I got to tell you man, you got some skills!
The only think I disliked was that the guitar playing the main tune was kinda low, so its really hard to listen to whats going on there...
OMG 3:20 really great job there, love the soft melo you added! Very original!
Overall is a really great tune!
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Keep up the great work!
Hails!
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